If your love was on the line,
Promises you had to keep,
If it was your truth, to shine,
And yet you sat to weep.
You tried some nifty tack,
To stem the teary flow,
You tried the best attack,
Without letting me know.
Your promises were dry,
Empty, unintended!
Your existence: a lie,
And your staunch stiff rules you mended!
At one crossroad of life,
If you had to let me go,
Answer me, as would a knife,
Just how far will you go?





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At one crossroad of life,
If you had to let me go,
Answer me, as would a knife,
Just how far will you go?
(strong, intense, beautiful!!)
have you updated you blog after a long time Sid? how are you?
boooooooooooooooootiful!
wow you came with a bang :) and i aint gotten any farther!
i m still on the crossroads :)
hope all is well!
back !! and with style !! so unique and so wow :)
That was some strong poetry mister!
But,
I wonder,
why nameless?
beautiful poem with an amazing ending.
u r bk sid?
the last line split me into two... i haven't seen a more "stabbing" question. sad. intense.
i have heard a million praises about you. glad to read your post. will visit back for more.
beautifully put...last stanza was so gud..
wow!
awesome stuff bro :)...
urs..hemu..
i think nobody on earth has an answer 2 this question...
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