I raised my sights, a bit too late
Disentangled the self, from the ropes of fate
Tired, unearthly and filled with hate,
I start my climb to thee
As I float high above, the skies so vast
Blue birds, they speed into naught, so fast
In ascension, they remind me, of my true past,
As I rise High o’er the sea!
I see you now, on your golden throne,
From the cell wherein you’ve had me thrown
I now lament, “If only I’d known!!”
That this was meant for me!
My Heaven, My Hell, is all but one
I’m fried and strung, for the sin’s I’ve done
Now I repent, but time stops for none,
And I Struggle to break free
From point of view of a sinner, The world looks pretty pessimistic.
Note: RiverSoul is not back from his blogging break yet. It could be a while before he returns. This post is at the behest of me, Leo, to update Silent Recollections. It has been posted by me on his behalf, and I will be posting his works due to his lack of time and resources. Though the posting is by me, Leo, the work is an original RiverSoul creation.






16 Reviews. Click Here to comment:
its not very often that i comment first on something i posted!
so here is a record! :)
as for the poem, its a riversoul original. it would obviously be a masterpiece! :)
Thank you, Leo.
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Yea! That really is a record.
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:D
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Rock on.
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And i promise i'll be back soon.
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Thank you, Leo.
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Yea! That really is a record.
:)
:D
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Rock on.
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And i promise i'll be back soon.
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Welcome back with a nice piece of writing.
"From point of view of a sinner, The world looks pretty pessimistic."
you make me realize i might have sinned a bit too much!
that poem was indeed something. nice..
where are u riversoul?? its enough..
we r in heights of missing u and ur post. m glad Leo got our soul back.. or else it wud wonder in heaven looking fr ur post.
stop laughing at my comment.. ok laugh!!
Welcome back :D missed your poems :)
poem was so nice...welcome back dude...missed ur poems a lot..:)...
urs..hemu..
A Classic reason as to why you should return soon dude...
Thanks to Leo for posting this on ur behalf... cheers...
Really nice poem....
Well described feelings from the view of a sinner who realizes it's too late to repent.
But it's not too late for the rest of us :)
Thank you, guys, for such an enthusiastic welcome....
I miss you guys a lot too.
I swear i'll be back soon.... Just been busy and the exams are looming in the distance.
:(
Thank you soooo much, guys. Really makes me feel loved and wanted..
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B-eautiful!
Nice work..
awesome...
Thank you Leo for posting riversouls wonderful beautiful sad poem. Please give riversoul my regards and I miss you and your lovely post and poems riversoul.
I've been away also. Just now today managed to get someone to help me find an internet server so I could get back on my laptop and get online and see how my dear blog friends are doing.
Thinking of you...take care and good luck with your exams and all..I know how it goes when there just is no time to blog..we understand..more than you may know.
Love and Blessings,
Rhi
Thanks everyone. . . . I'm pretty beat rite now... Will get back soon. . . I'm glad you guys still like reading me. :) :)
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