I wished for a friend in the darkest times,
A friend I wished to be,
As I drowned in my own fateful rhymes,
My thoughts weighed in on me
I felt too lost; too numb, I knelt,
I felt just as lonely,
As lonely as she must have felt,
The day she had left me
She’s Gone! She’s Gone! I said and wept,
My tears just knew no end,
My cries were soft, yet so well kept,
In a heart that would not mend
Time thus passed like a silent curse,
My cries, I stifled out,
But things soon went from bad to worse,
My cries had turned to shouts
Maybe that’s why my pain was heard
And someone did respond,
Just when I thought my end had neared,
My life seemed like reborn!
I opened out, like I never could,
She made me feel consoled,
She watched me, like a mother would,
She watched my life unfold
Her open arms I sought and found,
I rested there and cried,
She brought me back to my rebound
Her love, personified!
She found in me what I had lost
My vision she restored,
What I thought could never mend,
With love, it had been cured
“She’s now too far” some say to me,
But that is so untrue,
For when I close my eyes and see,
I find her, true and true.
Dedicated to Nidhi, on her Birth Day
:)
Happy Birth Day, Girl!
:)






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whole post for me?? :O :O
tht too a poem from riversoul??
its like a autograph from amitabh bachann :D
Thanks so much. amazing poem lovely lines. u gave too much credit to me ya, nt sure if m worth it.
yes i'll b there fr u as a fren, sis, nt much exp abt motherly love but lets see (kidding)
stay tough, cherish good moments. life is short. U have a long way to go,
U simply ended my day with the perfect post. thanks so much Sid
that was awesome sid! nidhi must feel so special :)
lovely lines..well, wat I would say is..nidhi lucky gal..:P
lucky friend!
belated happy birthday to nidhi
n happy birthday to aayu! :)
nice lines there sid! :)
ah thats such a beautiful dedication bro!!! happy birthday nidhi :)
thanks every one for the wishes. I had a grt day :)
once again thanks sid for making it special.
belated wishes friend :)..
urs..hemu..
Someone's luck luck luccckyyy!!
Happy budday Aquarius Sis!
*And siiiiiiid..aren't you missing someone bday TODAY? :P
Belated wishes to Nidhi!! :D
@RS : This time Nidhi's the one that the poem speaks about... but you'll write again (just so beautifully) and it needn't be anyone's birthday that day!! Then who?? ;)
See you when I see you... :)
Belated Happy Birthday Nidhi...Sid really makes bdays special...isnt it??
Nidhi is too lucky to have been gifted such a beautiful poem...amazing Siddharth!!!! Truly loved it...Keep it going...cheerz
P.S: Visit ma blog soon...u hav something unexpected waiting :)
Happy Birthday to Nidhi,,,
what a beautiful poem.
God bless friends...
You deserve every bit of the credit i've given you in those lines, Nidhi.
Thank you, i'm glad you had a
Happy birthday
:)
Thank you, Divya
:)
She sure is, Priya
:)
:)
Thank you, Seher
:)
Thank you Trinaa
:)
Come back.
:x
Thank you Hemu
:)
Thank you Hemu
:)
Thanks Mayz
:)
Thanks Aayu
:)
I didn't forget it.
:D
And Pranav, maybe i'll answer that question some other day. Thanks anyway.
:)
:)
I'm glad you think so, Diana
:)
Bless you.
:)
Riversoul, I'm awarding you with the Fabulous Blog award. Please come to my site and pick it up!
Congratulations Rajesh.
:)
You Can't imagine how happy i am for you, bro.
And what you call unexpected, is something i thought possible many weeks ago, in that poem i wrote in your comment that you said you did not understand.
:)
Thank you Mampiji.
:)
:)
Glad you liked it.
:)
Wow catvibe.
:)
:)
Thank you!
I'll be right up.
:)
Its very nice! its the type of poetry I like
wow!!!
wonderful dedication!!!
happy b'day nidhi!!!
nice poem!!n yes,wishes 2 nidhi!!
This poem was so awesome, it was over whelming, I read it a couple of times before writing this. you have a wonderful blog site, keep up the good work.
Yvonne.
Happy Birthday to Nidhi and thats a wonderful post!!! What a great way to say Happy Birthday!
@how do we know -thanks fr the wishes
@sid- where r u lost??? my post is waiting for ur comment. i wrote smthign like poem.
She found in me what I had lost
My vision she restored,
What I thought could never mend,
With love, it had been cured
Great lines! Singsongy again-it could be made into a beautiful song..really
& belated Happy Happy Birthday Nidhi!
May God bless you always
awesome!!! beautifully expressed!!! nidhi must be so happy.. :)
A wonderful, beautiful, touching poem....
beautiful post.....loved it
harry
www.arenaoflife.blogspot.com
do visit n comment on ma blog
:)
Very nice lines.
@Matangi Mawley - very happy
OMG ! U are sooo talented! I wish i was like you ! chwck my blog and tell em what do u think ?? but i;m just a beginner <3
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