Lost in your thoughts, I roam, insanely
In search of your sights, that looks unlikely
Looms ahead of me a future that is just as dark
Just as dark as my past, as lonely and stark
Doomed for all eternity, to miss your caress,
Fooled by my fate, into a life of distress
Tried and tested by a jury of ill luck
I gave up my stance, turned into a sitting duck
How is it that you came to be with me?
Was it destiny, or purely a mystery?
Why were you by my side at all?
Was it for me? Coz I was afraid to fall?
Did you come just to leave me later?
See how I’d wither? Become a hater?
Are you like one of those winds of fate?
With me for a while, and a little too late?
In search of your sights, that looks unlikely
Looms ahead of me a future that is just as dark
Just as dark as my past, as lonely and stark
Doomed for all eternity, to miss your caress,
Fooled by my fate, into a life of distress
Tried and tested by a jury of ill luck
I gave up my stance, turned into a sitting duck
How is it that you came to be with me?
Was it destiny, or purely a mystery?
Why were you by my side at all?
Was it for me? Coz I was afraid to fall?
Did you come just to leave me later?
See how I’d wither? Become a hater?
Are you like one of those winds of fate?
With me for a while, and a little too late?
P.S.: Advanced Happy Republic Day To Y'All!!







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seems ur searchin to much..may be look beside u :)...nice one sid :)..
urs..hemu..
Thank You, Hemu. . . .
Maybe You are Right
:)
nice poem..happy republic de..
Have a nice Republic Day people! Nice, unique wish Riversoul:)
You should have had a seperate msg for Republic Day..and then put it differently from the poem..I was thinking the poem is something about India..but anyway shrugging through he flaws..was good.
And Master! :P..check you mail please..sent you Edison Square's temp. html! :P..
And yez..check x-cz also!
beautiful poem ... enough to put any one leaving you to think twicw ;)
ps: lovely blog name !! m adding you to my blogroll :)
Its a very classical rhyme, nice one!
heartfelt but i would just like to suggest ya just let it loose for a while and let the fate play
god bless:)
n u say ur not in luv!!!
happy republic day...!!!
Dear Sid
Consider these lines are coming from our motherland on replublic day to people like us...the last lines..
"..did you free me just to serve later?
to those who don't deserve to be our leader.
Are you one more of those meek deserters?
who have lost their soul..can't do better"
wuts happening bro?
I strongly believe that only Love can make people write so beautifully
beautiful :)
wish u the same...
nice post
This is called ur up? please sid ..busy urself in something .. i know the poetry is beautiful ..but u can't keep lo forever
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