Do you remember, my dearest friend?
That September day?
The day when rain Gods sorely wept,
That day you crossed my way?
Hark back to those midsummer rains,
Which soaked us through and through!
Those lovely drops of dancing grains,
Our way that nature threw!
Do you remember our one resolve?
“To stick” didn’t we intend?
As well as grains of salt dissolve,
Their way in water’s blend?
Aren’t you reminded of those times?
Those times we tried to fight?
Those times we ended up on knees,
And praised each other’s might?
You must remind yourself of me,
Even if I’m now long gone,
For each is on the other’s side,
Right where we do belong . . .





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Wow, good one. Refreshing enough and yet so intense in nature.
I think each of us have someone with us like this whom we remember more so often along with the promises we made together..
Good one!
kya ho gaya bachcha?
Is it a creative work? or one straight from the heart, addressed 2 someone???
seems to b the latter....anyways...nice...touching actually :)
we met in september?? i forget the details of the day...
but the poem is lovely...
beautiful poem.
almost felt like you wrote it with me in mind.
'm sure everyone feels that way :D
good poem. textbook material
It nice I like the last two lines they sound really good!
I really like the sentiment in this poem. It expresses that wonderful feeling of connection when friendship is new, and the feeling is strong. I love the imagery of water throughout the poem.
The cat get's smarter by the day!! :P
Refreshing indeed!! :)
See you when I see you... :)
P.S. You still stay there's no one real?? ;)
Wow!...so beautiful,pure and lovely and so many other things which cant be expressed in words...
Loved it to the core!!
As well as grains of salt dissolve,
Their way in water’s blend?
............
beautiful line.. :)
ahh! so very beautiful sid. :)
Will start with what I've been intending to say for a long time but have been too lazy to click on the comments button, your poems have got considerably better since the first time I read your stuff.
This particular one took me back to the question I've been asking and reasking myself- why does a person give so much importance to the past, why are broken things still kept close to the heart? Isnt it more practical to wipe the slate clean? Apparently not.
Nice one buddy...
beautiful!!it was refreshing..
Here's to your hope !!!
well penned.
Brought me a feeling inside...my cousin lives near Ground Zero..and looking at it everyday sucks! :(
Questions questions and no answers are there? Nice post indeed Riversoul
Hey nice one :)
That was so touching!
A must read for everyone who has misplaced a loved one in the journey of life.
lovely post!!
a fitting tribute 2 friendship...
isnt that a myth? ;)
now u r dead? sid...stop being dukhi ..thats my domain ..u r supposed to post nice sweet poems that make us feel good
Awesome poem ! Lovely Blog! :)
Check out mine !
Beautifully penned....
Love your blog! read about 4-5 posts...each seems to be coming directly from heart....enjoyed reading them...perhaps we write best when we are in pain...somethings are good about pain :)
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