When the fruits of my repentance,
Are ripened well by time,
When all my faults and errors
Are tested and retried,
I’ll hold my arms wide open,
Welcoming your stride
When all the drops of water
Have dried up from the seas,
With all my sins forgiven,
I’ll do just the things I please,
I’ll hold my arms wide open,
In honor of your pleas!
When love has once more blossomed
In your heart for me,
Your blindness will have lessened
Enough for you to see,
I’ll hold my arms wide open,
For you’ll come back to me.
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48 Reviews. Click Here to comment:
WoW..how simple and true!
I simply adore this one, I feel what you have written I could hear what 'you' were saying
Love :-)
wonderful.
one of ur best.
so very deep and beautiful
beautiful!!!i liked the theme of the poem very much.
Very profound.. Really liked it..
Blessed Be,
Meow
this was beautiful... i had tears (of godknowswhat) in my eyes reading this, and this is coming from a person whose tear glands apparently dont function :D
Thanks Bhawana
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Glad you liked it.
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Thanks preeti
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Its great to see that you like it
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Thanks Anwesa
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Glad you liked it
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Welcome, Meow
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you like?
Me honored.
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Do come back for more
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Hey Sneha,
I'm glad you liked it.
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Tears? Wow. From you, that is a gr8 compliment
:D
for a moment your title made me think of Creed :P
another beautiful creation! man, you got a mind worth a zillion bucks!
Wow, Anil,
Creed?
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Glad you liked the poem
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Thank you.
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yup dude she'll come back to u...n if she dsnt we'll kidnap her ;)
I second mayz ;)
he he :D
nice write :)
I second mayz ;)
he he :D
nice write :)
Too good man!!! U were honest in ur words....perfect way to start with...fruits of repentance etc etc...lovely!!! and u ended it on a touching note...good one...
Heart-felt!!!
Thats deep feeling riversoul-loved the feeling in the poem-it comes out slowly and then hits you fully...
that's so beautiful and honest emotions.. heartfelt,, indeed.. :-)
nifty verse,, river soul.. :-)
Hee hee Mayz
:D
Thats very very helpful of you.
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Thank you,
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Hee hee Mayz
:D
Thats very very helpful of you.
:)
Thank you,
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Hee hee Mayz
:D
Thats very very helpful of you.
:)
Thank you,
:)
Thanks nan,
You can be Mayz's accomplice
:D
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Thanks a lot, Rajesh
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Glad you liked it.
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Thank you, mithe,
For grasping the flow of my poem.
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Glad you liked it.
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Thank you, Muzer
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Glad you liked it.
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gimme her name n address..abhi leke aate hain! :P
Ha ha tinni,
:D
But she relocated without telling me.
:D
When love has once more blossomed
In your heart for me,
Your blindness will have lessened
Enough for you to see,
And I will have succumbed by blindness
For you can never come back to me.
sorry for playing with your lines, but i just couldnt take the longing :)
but definitely yours is brilliant!
Oh my goodness, this poem gave me chills and brought me tears! I'll definitely be back here RiverSoul. Thanks for your comment on my piece at Clarity!
aww.. that one is so deep.. truly beautiful, Sid :)
Seher,
Nice wordplay
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Want to have a less happy ending eh?
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You're always welcome here, CatVibe
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Thanks for visiting my blog
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Do come again
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Nice to get that from you Lena,
:)
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Thank you
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Beautiful mann ....Specially the last para .....She will definately come back if "she"reads this :P
the post is transparent to ur heart..its soo beautiful :)...she will come bac to u soon :)..
urs..hemu..
Is someone talking about their personal experiences ?? ;)
Good succinctly expressed lines !!
Keep going !!
Profound. Very. As the saying goes, "Still waters run deep."
Peace.
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Back from one a self-imposed hiatus.
Tc.
very nice.
wishes
mip
Thank you, Anurag
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I sure hope that happens
:D
Thanks hemu
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Do come back soon
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Prashant
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Maybe.
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Thank you,
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Welcome back Kartz
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Thank you,
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Thank you, MiP
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wow
beautiful,
the progress of the poem also seems like it is opening its arms.
well simpally true
wish i could give my words the feeling like you do hats off!
Thank you, Mampiji
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Glad to see you back
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And glad you liked it
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You are a beautiful poet, manque
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Don't underestimate your skills
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I read your blog, and loved it..
:)
that is deep... very deep...
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