When the time is lost, and you’re lost in pain,
All you spy is dust, you’re drenched in rain
Remember my words, for they speak to you,
For your eyes ‘lone, sincere and true
You saw death grab him in your own backyard
In the play called life, as a hero he starred
And today you miss his loving embrace
In every nook and corner you seek his trace
Every passing moment reminds you of him
Every small resentment, every little whim
Every little victory with him by your side
Now so overwhelming, your calls for him denied!
Know this, little princess, I’m never far away
He whom you thought lost, is forever here to stay
What you saw, was a trifle, for I’ve never gone,
The soul, is ever deathless, but to death does life belong.
Of me, when you’re reminded, you’ll always find me there
But remember; make sure I never find, ever on you a tear
For some day in the distance, we will meet again, in Rhyme,
We’ll sit together, that instance, and test the strength of time!
This is a dedication To Two Wonderful People.
Both have lost a Loved One.
Both Pine for their losses.
I dedicate this to Princess DeeDee, and to a personal friend.






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A great tribute indeed and thaz what friendship is for. Deedee's blos is beautiful as her.
Aw!!!!!!
A nice dedication! - Nan
hey sid, read this a couple of days back itself...and loved it a lot...
m sure they will love it a lot too,
its written with passion, and emotions run through it....
regards the header...its nice.
WOW WOW WOW!!! And that's some good friend those two have for life. Man!!
...For some day in the distance, we will meet again, in Rhyme,
We’ll sit together, that instance, and test the strength of time!...
attaboy RiverSoul!! :D
See you when I see you... :)
who who? who personal friend?
Superb dedication sid ...really struck a chord as they say..the least you could do for them.
I love ya fr the heartending dedication,Sid.
My sympathies to Prince DeeDee and your friends..but guys,who don't need the sympathy,thou shalt need strength,and I shall pray to God for it!
it was wonderful..esp
"we'll sit together,at that instance,and test the strength of time".
kudos 2 u!!!
Thank u so much sid,
am immensely happy about the fact that ppl outside my family actually feel the respect and love i have for my grandfather :)
these are the things that make me feel like - my granpa is proud of me ;)
LOL for ppl who are wondering who this princess deedee is ------ its MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
:(
no words to describe my appreciation sid.
if i say anything it wud be less so i wud only say "i loved it".
yes princess dee dee is one precious gem.
i loved d last two lines a lot.
thats such a sweet gesture, and a sweet dedication :)
Beautiful words, Sid :)
thanks everyone and special thanks to priya n preeti :P
wow sid! beautiful poem!! really, very well worded.. and that's a wonderful thing you've done, the dedication.
lucky you lukkydivz! princess DeeDee.. nice name :D
Oh my god.
'This' is beyond neautiful poetry!
I rem u introduced urself as a poet!
nw I knw why...
ah, glad I gotta read some nice stuff..
:)
Beautiful!! I love the end rhyme and time are my two favourite words in poetry!
thats an amazing poem Sid. very well written.
Wow, you have a great poetic heart! Your words still echo in my ears. Keep it coming! Good job !
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i could totally relate to this..u may not hv written this 4 me but it still feels like my life story..so thanks sid :')
beautiful poem man :)....lovely gesture of friendship :)...appreciate it big time :)..
urs..hemu..
The soul, is ever deathless, but to death does life belong.
Wow! beautiful line River Soul! Good dedication...I hope God gives both of them the strength to bear their losses....
Thankyou, Priya
:)
Yea. Thats what friendship is for,after all
:)
Thankyou, nan
:)
Thanks a lot leo.
:)
DeeDee loved it.
:)
Glad you did too
:)
Thankyou, Pranav
:)
I'm honoured you think so.
:)
See you when i see you.
:)
My personal friend wishes to remain unnamed as of now, Farah.
:)
Glad you liked it
:)
Yes, Crystal. But this wasn't a sympathy post. It was meant to be a consoling one.
Anyways, glad you like it
:)
Thankyou, Anwesa
:)
Yes, DeeDee. As I've explained in ur post, i feel d same way.
:)
I'm glad you took it in the right way
:)
Divya
:)
Thankyou
:)
Thankyou, express
:)
I'm happy you feel its a good poem
:)
Thank you, preeti
:)
:)
For that beautiful comment
:)
Thankyou, Lena
:)
They're my favorite lines too, A&P
:)
Thankyou
:)
Thankyou, Susan
:)
Wish you a merry christmas and happy new year too
:)
Thankyou Trinaa
:)
Relates to you?
Really?
Wow....
Thanks, hemu
:)
I'm sure god will, mithe
:)
Thankyou
:)
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